Short poem, bored poet, please rate. if ya want i wont force ya. be truthful like criticism?

Beauty makes a nice counterpoint. The second stanza looks a bit one sided on the negative, it says nothing of the love which caused the heartache, or the relationship which ended in desertion. The third stanza has some beautiful imagery which could probably be expanded, the sheet of velvet brought into focus like the stars transformed to diamonds, perhaps an object held in the palm that one examines. I like the mechanics of your last stanza, but would reintroduce there either time, or gift, or heaven as well to be consistent and draw the whole to completion.